Waiting for the bus

his is another one of my show not tell paragraph I did in writing. 

My brother and I sat on a wonky old door step waiting impatiently we both sighed; I could see my brother’s feet shaking violently; steam started coming out of my cherry red ears. We both looked at each other. When is this worn out bus coming

Chinese whispers

This is my Chinese whispers paragraph I did in writing.  We are trying to paint a picture in your head by showing not telling. 

Adam started it off; as he silently spoke into my ear I automatically started spitting out saliva as I laughed my head off! Jack was staring at me like I was a weirdo, 

he had no idea what was coming ahead

Angry paragraph

This is my angry paragraph I did based on this image.

Miss Northe had her head done. Mr. Eales face was as red as a cherry red tomato,

 furious words coming out of his mouth! A tear rolled down her miserable face.

 She thought she lost her job.